Student Feedback

Feedback Sheet – Student Work

Please refer to photography, colour, layout, font style, framing and cropping as well as font style and actual text in your response.

Please remember to be constructive in your criticism as this is work by students – not professional s

Name of product	What I thought were the strengths	What I thought were the weaknesses
New Wave	The double page spread has some good quotes and some good text in it.  All of the images are their own. Contains all the appropriate information on the front cover. The layout used is good and makes the magazine look a bit better. The grade I would give this would be C	The images where blurry. The font doesn’t really stand as much as you would like it to and this may not get the audience to buy the magazine. The pictures in the double page spread are really close together which makes it look messy. I don’t think that the colour scheme is good because it doesn’t match the theme of the magazine.
Shattered	The only thing that I thought was good about this piece of work was the interview on the double page spread. On the interview it gives the audience a good amount of information about the band. The grade I would give this would be F	The pictures on the front cover, content page and the double page spread are all very poor. They all look like they were taken I a rush in order to finish the piece of work, for example on the front cover we can see the back garden of someone’s house in the background, overall I think the whole piece of work seems rushed and unorganised.
Viue	One thing I think is good about this piece of work is the images. None of the images used are not blurry and are very easy to see clearly. Also I think that on the double page spread it gives out a good piece of information to the audience/ reader. The grade I would give this would be D	The bad thing about this piece of work is that on the contents page is the fact that they are not all of his own images. On the bottom left corner we can see an image of Noel Gallagher, which as we can see very clearly is not his own image.
Varsity	The thing I like about this piece of work is the images. On the front page the main image is in black and white, I think this adds effect to it and I think it makes it look a lot better. Also the fact that all of the images are taken on been used of the internet makes this piece of work a lot better. The grade I would give this would be C	The bad thing about this piece of work is the font used on the double page spread. In my opinion the font used is dull and boring which does not match the mood that is set by the front cover and the double page spread.
AM	The good thing about this piece of work is the double page spread. I think that the information that is given is a good amount and the font that is used. The font that is used is big and bold which will stand out to the audience and make them want to keep reading. The grade I would give this would be D	I think that the images that are used in this piece of work are bad.  I think that they are bad because all of them seem to be blurry and faded which makes the magazine look worse than it is. Another bad thing about this piece of work is the contents page, I think that it all seems crammed together and makes it look untidy.